In 1988, Margaret
Woodworth reported on a reading/writing method that demonstrated
significant success with her students at various levels, particularly in
their reading comprehension and preparation for using source materials
in their own academic writing. That method, which
Woodworth calls "the rhetorical précis," will be a central part of
our writing this semester as we seek to know more about topics for our
major projects. I reprint the basic outline here from Woodworth's
article:
Sentence 1:
Name of author, [optional: a phrase describing the
author], the genre and title of the work, date in parentheses
(additional publishing information in parentheses or note), a
rhetorically accurate verb (such as "assert," "argue,"
"suggest," "imply," "claim," etc.), and a THAT clause containing
the major assertion (thesis statement) of the work.
Sentence 2:
An explanation of how the author develops and/or
supports the thesis usually in chronological order.
Sentence 3:
A statement of the author’s apparent purpose, followed
by an "in order" phrase.
Sentence 4:
A description of the intended audience and/or the
relationship the author establishes with the audience. (54)
Woodworth included this example, as well, in
her article:
Sheridan Baker, in his essay "Attitudes" (1966), asserts that
writers' attitudes toward their subjects, their audiences, and
themselves determine to a large extent the quality of their
prose. Baker supports this assertion by showing examples of how
inappropriate attitudes can make writing unclear, pompous, or
boring, concluding that a good writer "will be respectful toward
his audience, considerate toward his readers, and somehow
amiable toward human failings" (58). His purpose is to make his
readers aware of the dangers of negative attitudes in order to
help them become better writers. He establishes an informal
relationship with his audience of college students who are
interested in learning to write "with conviction" (55).
Notice that Woodworth's example follows her
pattern exactly. The first sentence identifies the author (Baker), the
genre (essay), the title and date, and uses an active verb (asserts) and
the relative pronoun that to explain what exactly Baker
asserts. The second sentence explains the first by offering
chronological examples from Baker's essay, while the third sentence
suggests the author's purpose and WHY (in order to) he has set out that
purpose (or seems to have set out that purpose -- not all essays are
explicit about this information and readers have to put the pieces
together). The final sentence identifies the primary audience of the
essay (college students) and suggests how this audience is brought
into/connected to the essay's purpose. (For some other examples, click
here.)
The rhetorical précis is useful for students to master as they are
often asked to read a great deal of information, particularly as
juniors, seniors, and graduate students, and are expected to retain what
articles, essays, book chapters, and books are about. This method makes
for an excellent annotation of such texts, and I encourage you to use it
for other classes. Then, reviewing information involves reading a few
short paragraphs, rather than trying to skim 20 - 30 page articles the
night before tests. Such précis are also useful as you write longer,
researched papers because you may have read so many sources that you've
forgotten them all; with the précis, you can organize your thoughts by
sources AND because you wrote these (mostly) in your own words, you
don't have to worry about plagiarism.
Although these writings are short, they are quite challenging to do
well. The benefits, as Woodworth points out in
her article, are the following:
- After having used this method for a while, 76% of students
found reading difficult texts easier and discovered that they
retained information more effectively.
- 80% of those surveyed claimed that the précis helped them to
become more "critical thinkers."
- Likewise, 80% found that writing the précis helped them to
organize longer projects for writing classes.
- Of those surveyed, 56% found the précis useful in other
classes, particularly in regard to writing for other classes.
- The same number (56%) found that the précis helped them to
write more sophisticated sentence structured (which are one sign
of "A" writing to teachers across the disciplines).
Think carefully this semester about your writing and how it develops
using this method and see if you, too, experience the growth that
Woodworth's students experienced!
Here are some other examples of similar précis:
In her article "Who Cares if Johnny Can't Read?" (1997),
Larissa MacFarquhar asserts that Americans are reading more than
ever despite claims to the contrary and that it is time to
reconsider why we value reading so much, especially certain
kinds of "high culture" reading. MacFarquhar supports her claims
about American reading habits with facts and statistics that
compare past and present reading practices, and she challenges
common assumptions by raising questions about reading's
instrisic value. Her purpose is to dispel certain myths about
reading in order to raise new and more important questions about
the value of reading and other media in our culture. She seems
to have a young, hip, somewhat irreverent audience in mind
because her tone is sarcastic, and she suggests that the ideas
she opposes are old-fashioned positions.
from Bean, John C., Virginia A. Chappell, and Alice M.
Gillam. Reading Rhetorically, Brief Edition. New York:
Pearson/Longman, 2004. p. 63.
Toni Morrison, in her essay "Disturbing Nurses
and the Kindness of Sharks," implies that racism in the United
States has affected the craft and process of American novelists.
Morrison supports her implication by describing how Ernest
Hemingway writes about black characters in his novels and short
stories. Her purpose is to make her readers aware of the cruel
reality of racism underlying some of the greatest works of
American literature in order to help them examine the
far-reaching effects racism has not only on those discriminated
against but also on those who discriminate. She establishes a
formal and highly analytical tone with her audience of racially
mixed (but probably mainly white), theoretically sophisticated
readers and critical interpreters of American literature.
from
http://www.wam.umd.edu/~sapinoso/precis.htm
Sandra M. Gilbert, professor of English at the
University of California, Davis, in her essay “Plain Jane’s
Progress” (1977), suggests that Charlotte Brontë intended
Jane Eyre to resemble John Bunyan’s Pilgrim’s Progress
in that Jane’s pilgrimage through a series of events based on
the enclosure and escape motif eventually lead toward the
equality that Brontë herself sought. Gilbert supports this
conclusion by using the structure of the novel to highlight the
places Jane has been confined, the changes she undergoes during
the process of escape, and the individuals and experiences that
lead to her maturation concluding that "this marriage of true
minds at Ferndean – this is the way" (501). Her purpose is to
help readers see the role of women in Victorian England in order
to help them understand the uniqueness and daring of Brontë’s
work. She establishes a formal relationship with her audience of
literary scholars interested in feminist criticism who are
familiar with the work of Brontë, Bunyan, Lord Byron and others
and are intrigued by feminist theory as it relates to Victorian
literature.
from
http://www.winthrop.edu/english/core/success/precis.htm
Charles S. Peirce's article, "The Fixation of
Belief" (1877), asserts that humans have psychological and
social mechanisms designed to protect and cement (or "fix") our
beliefs. Peirce backs this claim up with descriptions of four
methods of fixing belief, pointing out the effectiveness and
potential weaknesses of each method.Peirce's purpose is to point
out the ways that people commonly establish their belief systems
in order to jolt the awareness of the reader into considering
how their own belief system may the product of such methods and
to consider what Peirce calls "the method of science" as a
progressive alternative to the other three. Given the technical
language used in the article, Peirce is writing to an
well-educated audience with some knowledge of philosophy and
history and a willingness to other ways of thinking.
from
http://oregonstate.edu/instruct/phl201/modules/rhetorical-precis/sample/peirce_sample_precis_click.html
Works Cited
Oregon State University Writing Program. "Sample
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Accessed: 05/08/2004.
Sapinosa, Joy. "The Rhetorical Précis Form." <http://www.wam.umd.edu/~sapinoso/precis.htm>.
Accessed: 05/08/2004.
Winthrop College Writing Program. "The Rhetorical
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Woodworth, Margaret K. "The Rhetorical Précis."
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